Sunday, June 10, 2012

The Sixth Paragraph: A Re-Vision of the Essay (Paul Lynch) & Reflective Writing and the Revision Process: What Were You Thinking? (Sandra Giles)

In these great articles, I would like to first say that I didn't enjoy reading it because it hit home.In Elementary school all the way to High School I avoided writing papers and essays. I didn't want to do them because "I DO NOT LIKE WRITING"!!!! My reason are because when I would write an essay, I would write what I though was good writing, but once the teacher handed me the essay back RED marks were everywhere. I'm learning alot being in English 0100, and it's helping me to  learn how to write, and hold my audience attention. So the authors purpose for their piece of writing is to inform the reader that in order to success you would have to write. The language that the author used was perfectly appropriate and understandable, very persuasive. Both authors cites books and articles in their writings. The advantages if I tried this same technique in my writing would be all A's. These are perfect examples to follow when writing. The techniques I would use is write, then write again, them revise and persuade.

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